Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Great, interesting beginning. I like the ending line the best.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

~Twilight Starr~

hey just wanna say great story so far. Keep on updating! But I noticed you dont have much insight into the charaters lives. Maybe try relating 2 their feelings?

I liked this chapter. And I really enjoy the way you keep weaving music into the story.

Thanks for the reviews.

I love the song references throughout the story.

*nails down a blackboard* Eww! I can stand gore perfectly well, as you have seen in my stories, but this is too much.

It was a bit weird, yes, but I suppose it somehow connects to the rest of the story.

So far I like it.

*sexually assaulted a seventy-nine year old man*

I already like this.

Wow. Long overdue, but nicely done. Very angsty at the beginning, very calm at the end. certainly sets up for more chapters, of which I hope will arrive soon.

Can't wait, Daphne. I mean, Trisha. I mean, Stormer. Right.

hahaha: depth to that skull I’d never imagined I’d find. amusing
Another fabulous installment! Although, it might change into I know not what, so I'll end this sentence now. Bring on the reposting!

~*aww* goes the ricki lake audience~
pretty ending, pretty ending.
I FINALLY got around to reading this! Took a while, but the wait was worth it.

it's like the holiday from hell. Angst central, I love it! 'Tis the beer, I say! evil beer makey they go bitchy. or something.

Anyway, what a pleasant surprise! I'll say it again: Fabulously written! Draws you in.

So surprise me again and post more, okey?

And *FINALLY* ye has arrived!!! After so long... is that a tear in my eye?
Not crap, not crap!!! Not even repetitous. Just one hell of a day for Daphne. Very angsty... me likey much :) Still witty, still with those subtle smirks. And still enigmatic; almost to the point of excruciating where I'm still clueless to it all. Alright, I have a *slight* clue, but still... MORE! MORE! Beautifully written, once again!

So go on.

Continue.

Alrighty?

Good.

:)

Curious chapter -curious in that I'm dying to know that all this fighting is about. The Emma thing kinda blew me out of the water -very much unexpected and keeping me on the edge of the seat, never revealing the entire story -which is VERY freakin' irritatingly effective in making me come back for more. You've built a great Daphne character: there are times when you can relate to her and times where she's completely distant and a mystery. Amazing, I *really* enjoy reading this story! Of course, you already knew that. Keep up the fantastic work! By the way, *love* the long chapters!

I just realised my reviews weren't posted because of that thingy with the site. Curses! And they were long, too! :)
Anyway, very witty; like a constant smirk

"proving once again that he is indeed male" -I think I unknowingly stole that from you for bitterweena. Heh. See what you're doing??!!?? you're creating a monster! Anyway, sorry about that. Didn't realise it until now.
Also like the sudden interruption of their trip with a flat tyre. Amen to those scrunchies, those hideous things!

once again, I seriously have no FREAKIN' idea why the hell people aren't reading this! Or at least reading it and not reviewing -curses to those people, even though I myself is one of them. While I feel privileged to be reading it, the story feels like a big secret and I just want to go tell everyone about it. Anyway, you already know the compliments, the jealousy, the obsessed stalker in the making, I'll not remind you this time.

ahh I don't know what to say. This is fast becoming my addiction, I can't wait to see how it all turns out. might i say again that your writing is great to read? well it is. keep it up.

anyway, have yourself a nice day :)

yay! I got my name on the internet! I'm so famous!
hee

Anyway, I've no suggestions since I'm completely clueless as to where you're going with the story. Another fantastic chapter... oh, the memories!

I think what makes the story succeed is the characters being so real and imperfect (I hate perfect characters. die, vermin!). To me, and in my interpretation of the story, they all have this element of mystery around them and even they don't know their true selves. My interpretation, anyway.

Anyway, there's another chapter, so I best be off and read it. taataa