i like your story. please update soon. and i would love to see the characters' pics.

Gomen it took me so long to review this...but It's REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!

hmmmmm thought i already reviewed for this chapter...obviously not.

WHY is she goign to have to kill them?????????? i don't want them to diiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

:'( so sad..........

Hey, what's up? Um, REALLY good so far! Who are the couples? I mean...is Jacqueline going to paired with anyone? Gomen, I'm just a hopeless romantic. Um...I'm actually not confused...for once. REALLY GOOD! CONTINUE!!!
~*~Kawaii Hotaruchan~*~

whoa!!! character overload. . . hehehe ^________^ Good job so far, it's getting even more interesting. . .

getting very good! (on my fav stories list, you on my fave authors list.)
Ja!

LUV IT!!! WRITE MORE!! PLEASE!!!!

Hey great story!! PLEASE please please please please write more!!

that was really really good! =D i cried at the end of the 1st chpt........:'( hope u continue soon :) :) :):D :D :D

I mean this in the nicest way but you need to get a beta reader darling...I was confused [although you know how easily that can happen] who broke up with who? Did he dump her? Or what cause I thought he had and then it was like 'would they accuse her of causeing his death?' how could she do that if HE dumped her? okay, I'm gonna go now...ahh, bio teacher, RUN!!!!!

Hey! This was really good...quite confusing but I'm sure that it'll start to completely make sense once you get the next chapter out (hint hint). Anyway, continue please!!! Really cool so far.
~*~Kawaii Hotaruchan~*~

cool...... write more....soon. ::is dazed and has a far off expression::

let's seee, more, more more more more more more more and more. Hey it's gettin good, so come on and let's move it! Move it or else ill, um... ill figure out something

wow this sounds painfull, if u know what i mean. it's sad and gloomy, but it's a nice 1st chapter. Is it gonna be this depressing next chapter? I'm not complaining or ne thing, just wanna know. ^__^