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Reviews For: Unicorns
Darkening Mist 2005-05-25 . chapter 1
nice poem!! short but good! you know about The Last Unicorn too? COOL!! I thought is was Lady Amalthea...
Angelica 2003-01-03 . chapter 1
very good, but the end is just a touch off kelter. Try adding a bit and revising a little. This has potential.
Lornyl Mahtsae 2002-03-31 . chapter 1
I'm not sure about the A/N:, but the poem wuz kewl
Emily M. Hanson 2002-02-18 . chapter 1
Cute. :)
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