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| Werecat99 2003-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseThat was brilliant! I've rarely read something so fresh and original. And in a few lines you've captured the essence of each weapon perfectly. My personal favorite is the staff, though. And the daggers, preferably poisoned. |
| Ronin Rabbit 2003-03-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting little poem, a little short considering the range of weapons out there ;) I'm assuming that the title is referring to what we as writers might choose for the weapons. Seems to cross a fine line when dealing with weapons, whether your descriptions can be said to be their symbolism or their cliche. Personally I think too many people place certain weapons into very rigid and specific categories, that can limit their possible uses within a story or possible meaning can be seen as overused. |
| Loganberry 2003-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI always think you can't beat a set of good, sharp teeth. and yeah, I am reviewing this rather than anything else 'cause it's short. Lazy, that's me! =;) |
| AaZz 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abusei like |
| Moonwinges 2002-11-24 ch 1, | abuseHuh, I never thought of it that way. So far, my characters usually only fry people with magic. I think there are even more weapons, like staffs and daggers and spears, that you could also add if you wanted more stanzas. I really like the poem though - it really makes you think about stereo-types. Thanks again for your review on The Time of Legends! I have read "So You Want To Be A Wizard", but I was never even aware she had written any other stories. My sister was actually talking about how she'd like to live in a world with DBZ characters when I thought of it (Sad, I know.) |
| Kowski 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuse.......nurt.........? Anywhoozles......Good job! Sminkleo |
| Carter Tachikawa 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAnother very interesting and well-written poem. Makes you wonder what to choose...I don't know what I would choose myself. Great poem. I'll be sure to read your fiction sometime soon too.~CT |
| Aurora Light 2002-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHmmm. Interesting idea you used here. The rhythm seems a little off in the second stanza, but it's very good over all. I'd like to see more along this line. :) |
| Night Shade 2002-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting....I will definitely have to read more of you pieces. |
| Alma 2002-04-18 ch 1, | abusea clever little poem! i like it! ^_^ |
| Belldandy 2002-04-15 ch 1, | abuseO_o Ok... I don't get it much, but cool |
| FlamingDragon 2002-03-24 ch 1, | abuseooooh....weeeeapoons........blooooood....preeeetty..... by the way my friends are going to kill you for mentioning blood to me. i hope you don't mind, heheh... uh, yeah. u reviewed some of my stuff so i'm reviewing some of yours. feel loved. |
| Raiegki Leviathan 2002-03-12 ch 1, | abuseZamber: A new perspective. Rekka, put the gun away. Rekka: But...fine...*Throws Uzi behind her* I still don't see why a gun isn't an enchanted weapon. Zamber: ...You still have your OTHER murder weapons, isn't that enough? Rekka: Fine...Oh, Kaijinya, we changed our description. =^.^= |
| Toireasa 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHmmmm, nice work. I like it. Writers choice? My choice is easily a Scythe. ::sigh:: |
| Shadow 3013 2002-02-27 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Cute. Don't know if it was intended to be or not, but I have a thing for poetry and weapons, and seeing as this combined the two... Yay, is all that comes to mind, so... Yay! |