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| Venus Smurf 2002-10-24 ch 1,  | abuseNice. You have a difinitive gift, and I certainly think you should cultivate that gift by writing more. Keep it up. |
| Misplaced Innocence 2002-02-26 ch 1, | abusewow...what else to say, but wow? |
| NemesisZero 2002-02-20 ch 1, | abusewow, that's a pretty powerful bit of wordsmithing. the indention structure seemed kind of off, though, in that the repeted section is no the only part that is indented, even though the footstep-inducing pattern is nice. you wouldn't happen to be from bellevile, whould you? i used to know a guy that called himself smurf from there... |
| Nobody In Particular2 2002-02-19 ch 1, | abuseThat's one of my favorite poems so far on here.. I think I'll put it in my favorites? You are so talented. |