I'll review!

And be nice about it, too! lol I know there's more chapters than this, but I had to review this so you'd know what I think. So far, it's really good, but the big thing that bothers me if that you haven't told the readers who's talking(telling the tale) and who's on the team. Now, I guess the team is mentioned later on, but you still haven't told us who's talking and who
is investigating. I think this would be an awesome story if you just added more character info to it.

I have to start somewhere!!!!! Anyone please review this for me. I want to know what people think, so I can continue it.!!!!!!!!!!!