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Alone in the Desert 2002-08-05 . chapter 1
Captures the melodramatic mood of depression. The end seems a bit cryptic. How does hell figure into it all?
A good poem, though some of the strength of the words is lost in a way I can't put my finger on.
Shining Moonlight 2002-03-21 . chapter 1
well, i don't believe in hell but i do like how you worded the comparison between tears of blood and tears of...well, tears.
Meina 2002-02-20 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery and you captured the mood perfectly.
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