That was really good, I liked that coz I know what it's like...

perhaps, u could change ur genre and theme.
make it more sunny.(now,now, dun think off course.)

Life's not bad, it does not stink. it simply goes or doesn't go ur way.

Very sad but dramatically beautful. You work convincingly with the elements of blood and the act of cutting though its not my right to ask if its personal or not.

How does one know you will find happiness in death? For all you know, the only solace can be found in an attempt to live. Life might seem like a never ending pit... but it's not. There is life out there, and it is easy to find happiness again.
--Toireasa