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Alone in the Desert 2002-08-05 . chapter 1
I like how you try to emphasize things with capitalization (and the lack thereof). Good job. Short poems are usually my favorite.
A note: "starting of end" sounds weaker than "beginning of end". Maybe a glance at the old thesaurus is in order, if you don't want to repeat the word "begin" or "beginning" three times.
Meina 2002-02-20 . chapter 1
I like this one alot. Truthful but contradicting at the same time.
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