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Wrong feelings
Synia
2002-03-03 . chapter 5
A few words could have been replaced to make it move along smoother but besides that good.
Karmatic Sunshine
2002-02-21 . chapter 1
i love it, it shows both sides,
intresting idea, keep up the good work
Karma
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