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True Love
Sakamura
2003-06-15 . chapter 1
Poetry...romance unrequited...so beautiful. Great poem.
Alone in the Desert
2002-08-05 . chapter 1
The beginning is strong, but it sort of wanes towards the end. I also can't make heads or tails of your capitalization. Is it random, or planned? I like the contrast between fire and ice at the beginning.
Fire of the Vampire
2002-04-27 . chapter 1
This is really good!
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
cinder's rose
2002-02-22 . chapter 1
i love this- its so touching!
Meina
2002-02-21 . chapter 1
the last line tied it together for me and the next to the last stanza as well. Beautiful job!
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