Or are you still mad at me? I'm sorry for being mean last time we talked. I was being really insensitive. Forgive me?

Wow, MC, that was pretty interesting. Who was it about? By the way, you really need to get on Facebook.

This has got to be one of the things I love about honest poetry. Perspective.
Nice.

ratio women to men
2:1

what does this mean? get over it, there is no such thing as love but there is plenty of women parading the planet asking for **. depression is a **, so why don't you go get one?

bro, I cant help but feel that you can just click refresh to update this story to modern times. It was good, but I cant help but think about when you said my poem wasnt good, or at leat you dont like; "emotional poetry" but all personal ** aside, I hope I never go through that **, sorry buddy, you deserve.uh.a cool version of avril lavine. yeah.

My, my, wasn't that Wait and Bleed that I heard playing in the background? It had to be, I just know it. Anyway, good written. Especially on the emotinal plane.

holy hemorrhaging ** goddamn asslicking **. in reading this, you made me feel guilty as all hell because now i'm scared this is what'll happen to someone close to me eventually if i'm not careful...oh, god, i feel like such a ** now. 'twas really quite excellent though...added props for using a NIN song as the title. cheers!

..I try to reveiw everything I read...and this certainly deserves a review, but will you forgive me if I omit the obvious and tell you there is more in this feeling that can be expressed in words, but that your poem/prose thing has come very, very close to it.

M.C. this is the most disturbing piece of ** I've ever read...write more...

That was really deep, and brutally honest.

one word...
Awesome.
10 out of 10 stars.

Very profound, blunt, and is the absolute of everything one feels when the confusion that was gone returns with an explosion.

Holy ** bagels!

Well buddy, I know what thats like, and I thought this story was really good, as specialy knowing that its true, (well metaphorical representation of course, but still) I definently enjoyed reading this, even though... well...

Women arent worth it, man! Dont let this one get ya down, even if it did help you churn out quite a little story.

Oh, and having a Nine Inch Nails song in the title, always scores bonus points with me.

four stars (plus a hug)