|Reviews for Broken Trust|
| Fire of the Vampire 5/3/02 . chapter 1
Ouch . . . Good. In the sense of very.
| Silkeara 4/26/02 . chapter 1
trust is a sacred thing. It should never be broken. And GODDAMMIT you're good!
| Give Me Stitchez 3/20/02 . chapter 1
i know what its like... i know that exact feeling... its not very pleasent, but you described it well _
| White Arab 2/23/02 . chapter 1
wowser!great stuff, like I've already told you. You are sooooo good at descriptions. This simply throbs with feeling. Upload more!
| Abyssinian1 2/22/02 . chapter 1
There is too much giddy happiness surrounding us at day.. we need depression, often times. When it comes in the form of well-written crap.. it's great. Great crap, Jill! XD *glomp* Love it!
| Celtica 2/22/02 . chapter 1
Wow! Really nice...it's prosy . It's really good! The feelings are really strong in this, the anger and hatred. Amazing work! I especially liked
"The pain... the never ending waves... No tides... No rests... Just an eternity of suffering... " That was a really interesting way to describe the pain! Wonderful Job! Keep Writing! -Celtica
| Mackenzie Anderson 2/22/02 . chapter 1
whoa.. i could feel the anger, the pure emotion coming from this.. damn. very well written.