| Reviews for Broken Trust |
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Fire of the Vampire 5/3/02 . chapter 1Ouch . . . Good. In the sense of very. God Bless Much Love Later Daze - Kacie |
Silkeara 4/26/02 . chapter 1 trust is a sacred thing. It should never be broken. And GODDAMMIT you're good! |
Give Me Stitchez 3/20/02 . chapter 1i know what its like... i know that exact feeling... its not very pleasent, but you described it well _ |
White Arab 2/23/02 . chapter 1wowser!great stuff, like I've already told you. You are sooooo good at descriptions. This simply throbs with feeling. Upload more! |
Abyssinian1 2/22/02 . chapter 1There is too much giddy happiness surrounding us at day.. we need depression, often times. When it comes in the form of well-written crap.. it's great. Great crap, Jill! XD *glomp* Love it! |
Celtica 2/22/02 . chapter 1Wow! Really nice...it's prosy . It's really good! The feelings are really strong in this, the anger and hatred. Amazing work! I especially liked "The pain... the never ending waves... No tides... No rests... Just an eternity of suffering... " That was a really interesting way to describe the pain! Wonderful Job! Keep Writing! -Celtica |
Mackenzie Anderson 2/22/02 . chapter 1whoa.. i could feel the anger, the pure emotion coming from this.. damn. very well written. |