amazing thuie. loved it. so so true too. keep writing! and ur right...boys play as much as girls!

woooooooow. hehe, i made it in2 a song as i wuz readin. lalalaaaaaaaaa...

my thought while reading the poem...

1. (while reading the summary) forfiet the game before you put your name to shame, cover up yourself, you can't run the race, the pace it to fast you just won't last...i mean, yeah...so anyway...

2. NINJA KID! i mean, karate kid...::starts singing wax on, wax off to the Points of Authority tone::

3. ::gasp:: thu-thu cursed! oh my, what has this world come to?

4. i need to use this for a song, woman...i like it, it's better (and shorter) than your other ones...

*applause* :D niccccccce

Hey, great poem!!! Very aggressive, love it, it's just absolutely dahling... anyone in the mood for a game of cards (spit, preferably)..lol

C'est tres excellent! Bon...umm I don't know the French word for poem...o well...anyway, it was great! Guys are like pills...

yeah... that was good.