i like the beginning, but it sorta rushs at the end...Though i can relate to the story.

Wow. I love this story! I used to be suicidal... so I know how it is. Part of me thnks I still am, but I know I could never kill myself. Yet. Anyway, this is a wonderful story, and i hope to see you write other fantastic stories!

another great one. i had some good comments bout this one, but someone knocked me out of my own little world. damn people. good story... no, great... another "wow" story.

awwwww nooooooooo just wait one more year!!! you can do it! tape up your wounds, it will all be okay!

t'was a good story, nice and short. I know how that is (minus the burning, abuse and dog beating) I know how suicidal thoughts can be.

As I said, very good story, you write well.

I Just wish you had lived at the end... now I have go to bed sad. *sigh*

4.5 out of 5 stars!

Good