Yay, the first Japanese myth to add to my community! Hehe, I never thought I would find one. Anyway, I like how to wrote this. So descriptive... :)

wow Isabella you are really good at writing... I doubt you'll ever see this seeing how its 2005... keep writing babe and you should write poetry too, from what I have read of your stuff it has a nice soft style to it, you should explore the darker side, and maybee the warmth between lovers

whoh......that was cool....is that all of the myth? and how much did you make up?

Sooo short but cute yet sad!!!! Awsome Kay babe!! Keep up the good work

That was good...^-^ and thank you for reviewing my poem a while back!

I like it. It was kinda creepy though, but I guess that's why I like it ^_^

oo, yea, I've heard a tale like this before,
hmm...Yuki means snow *adds it to her list of Japanese words*
o, and thx for the review

ooo, creepy! But I still like it very much!

It's so sad. It's great though! Thank's for reviewing my story!

Oh wow this is so good! It's touching and mysterious. You did a beautiful re-write! :)

i read it again!!!!! i couldnt tell what u changed, as its been so long since ive read it, but there u have it. ah well. i'm gonna go now!
Ja!
S*N
--MtSoIgwy...

Good concept but I have some suggestions.I think for quality's sake you should elaborate and perhaps do some more detail and characterization.It's hard for me to form an opinion when it goes so quick but the story has tons of potential.What you have so far is beautifully written but again...a little too abrupt.

I like it, up to the last part which is a little odd. More emotions and descriptions would make this a vibrant and beautiful story (not that I'm saying it isn't already, It is very nice.) Remember, I am a disciple of the reviewer from hell, so I apologize if I offend you ::sweatdrop:: I like this and would like to see a revised draft.

Hey, this is the person who wrote this fab myth! (jk) Anyway, like I said in my bio, I was very mad so I deleted all my stories. Here are the old reviews (I love reviews!):

Tolynn Chakith Date: 2002-02-17 Ch: 1
Interesting version of the story.....kinda creepy, but still good. Thanks for reviewing my stories, btw. ^.^

Umi-chan Date: 2002-02-13 Ch: 1
An interesting read...appropriately brief. Thanks for the review!

Jellibeana () Date: 2002-02-12 Ch: 1
Duuuuude. That's freaky! But very well written! I agree with The Gimli Glomper (my best friend) -not a bedtime story! ^_____^

Champion's Fire Date: 2002-02-12 Ch: 1
Interesting rewriting, Do you have a copy of the original? nice job.

The Gimli Glomper Date: 2002-02-04 Ch: 1
spooky...DEFINATLEY not a bedtime story ^_^ nice way of putting it!

Fireborn Darkness Date: 2002-01-24 Ch: 1
Whoa!! Freaky!! That's not cool, leading him on and all... Anyway, good interpretation, even though I've never heard the original! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my stuff, and for the flower! Hurrah! Oh geez, one last thing: Legolas is hot!!!!!

sonic () Date: 2002-01-16 Ch: 1
this is a scary story

Hairy (stagegirl256@aol.com)Date: 2002-01-14 Ch: 2
good! one of your best! thanks for the change! ;)

Chocolate Star Date: 2002-01-12 Ch: 1
oh wow, this is great, quite disturbing though, gives me a hollow feeling in my stomache, (or it could just be that im hungry) great work! I decided to review you cause u reviewed me! *winks* thanx

Anna Lyn Date: 2001-12-31 Ch: 1
Very nice interpretation of a beautiful story~ You really should continue on with the story... Make up a new ending for it....it sort of lacks a bit (the real one, not saying tours is bad! Because yours is absoloutly wonderful the way it is~)...~ Hope to hear more form you

Untouchable Eagle Date: 2001-12-20 Ch: 1
That's just creepy... it kinda goes a little fast, ya might want to get some more details about when they met/before they married.

Sapphire Wicca Date: 2001-12-05 Ch: 1
thats a freaky story.

This shows you how desperate I am for reviews!!! ^.^ Anyway, read all my stories, SVP!!!

That is one scary myth. *shiver*