Beautiful. Extremely sad, don't get me wrong. But what makes it beautiful is how well it relates emotions, how clear and true it rings, how easy it makes it to understand what you're saying. Quite a nice poem. You have talent... and sad reasons for being inspired, which is not a problem, as my muses come when I feel down too. Well, I'll be left wondering if your father ever has, or ever will, read this poem... Damn conflicting emotions. Damn love/hate relationships with parents. Grrr.
Love the poem.
Terra...

*Cries* soooo sad. I feel for you. Love it, love it, love it!

From Kassandra Larrew

This poem is a vey good poem please write more it is very intersting.

I know I already told you that it was brilliant. It made sense and he doesn't seem like a good father or even a productive one. Seems distancing from the family, more an outsider than a guiding parental figure he is suppose to be.

:) have a nice day/night