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| Calvin Wong 2002-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseYour imagery is effective, and intelligent. Scarlet oceans of unrealized dreams. Absolute, powerful, and impressionable. I love this one. |
| Suzanne Star 2002-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOh....sad. Seriously, this hits really closely right now. Wow, it's frightening to look at the way people think (and I am a recovering cutter myself) when they do this. It almost makes TOO MUCH sense, if you know what I mean by that. Anyhow, very very touching and it totally got me. After I read it, I just kinda sat there for a few minutes...in awe, I guess. Nice job. ;-) |