That was just awsome.

Awesome again! I actually heard music with this one as I read it. Don't know if its the music you would put it to but it was really good. Love it!

...Interesting use of language. _ This one is great, none the less-gotta love the two sides of the song.

Heya. Your work, as always, is getting better and better :) Its getting easier and easier to hear a tune as you read as well which, I think, helps contribute to make a great song on a page. So, yeah, I'm back on and ready to review. Check out my latest? Looking foward to reading more of your great work. Keep it up!

Yet another great song. I'm running out of compliments, so just keep up the good writing, and write more soon! :-)

Erica

Thats a very interesting use of two voices. Very clever. I think I can learn a lot from reading your stuff.

Deeply written. I like.