Oh my. I had expected something like this. Well, I held on to a little bit of hope that it would end happier because I ran across it on the Some Kind of Wonderful site and it was listed under "best happily ever after." Very good never-the-less. I couldn't stop crying through the last 3/4 of the story. Great job!

Honestly, I'm a little afraid of how this is going to end. It's just so heavy and dark, ya know? Well, I guess you would... you wrote it. I'm a little hesitant to finish it but also curious because it's written so well and I really want to know.

Wow. this is super intense but the typos really interrupt the flow of the story.

wow crazy ridiculous story but i loved it

That is amazing. That is seriously what I am going to tell people what happened to Jack and Jill.

For real.

I am not joking. I don't care if it isn't true. That is what I am going to tell people though.

Oh my god! This is an AMAZING tale! I REALLY can't wait to read your other pressfics.
Bethan
=D

Poor poor Jack and Jill. =D

They're quite evil characters aren't they? But, I'm so glad they've found their love binding them together. It's so sweet!

AW! She is so in love with him! And I agree, Sylvia is a bitch.

AWW! This is awesome!

Ooh. I've got to go somewhere now, but when I get back...
SUPERB! =D

Jack's a very very weird character?

AWW! Poor poor Jill! Bless her little heart.

Oh poor poor Jill. She's so depressed! I can't wait to read more.

Brilliant. I know-- short, but that's seriously all I can say right now.