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Yellow.Jellow 2009-11-17 . chapter 9
Oh my. I had expected something like this. Well, I held on to a little bit of hope that it would end happier because I ran across it on the Some Kind of Wonderful site and it was listed under "best happily ever after." Very good never-the-less. I couldn't stop crying through the last 3/4 of the story. Great job!
Yellow.Jellow 2009-11-16 . chapter 3
Honestly, I'm a little afraid of how this is going to end. It's just so heavy and dark, ya know? Well, I guess you would... you wrote it. I'm a little hesitant to finish it but also curious because it's written so well and I really want to know.
Yellow.Jellow 2009-11-16 . chapter 2
Wow. this is super intense but the typos really interrupt the flow of the story.
Jayjack 2009-11-08 . chapter 9
wow crazy ridiculous story but i loved it
CaseyBear 2009-10-23 . chapter 10
That is amazing. That is seriously what I am going to tell people what happened to Jack and Jill.

For real.

I am not joking. I don't care if it isn't true. That is what I am going to tell people though.
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 10
Oh my god! This is an AMAZING tale! I REALLY can't wait to read your other pressfics.
Bethan
=D
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 9
Poor poor Jack and Jill. =D
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 8
They're quite evil characters aren't they? But, I'm so glad they've found their love binding them together. It's so sweet!
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 7
AW! She is so in love with him! And I agree, Sylvia is a bitch.
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 6
AWW! This is awesome!
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 5
Ooh. I've got to go somewhere now, but when I get back...
SUPERB! =D
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 4
Jack's a very very weird character?
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 3
AWW! Poor poor Jill! Bless her little heart.
bcargill9 2009-09-25 . chapter 2
Oh poor poor Jill. She's so depressed! I can't wait to read more.
Silver Salver 2009-09-18 . chapter 1
Brilliant. I know-- short, but that's seriously all I can say right now.
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