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McShortShort 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abusewow this story seems pretty intresting
RazorBladeFae1992 2008-06-21 ch 10,	abuseWow... that was probably one of the darkest tales I've ever read and I will never look at this rhyme the same way again. But the emotions and the way you potrayed Jack and Jill are really amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. -Fae
Ravensbleeding 2008-05-20 ch 10,	abuseWow. I loved the story. It was really great. I loved the rhyme that Sylvia made up for Jill. It was so...wicked. and I love the end a lot. It's nice.
cookymonster 2008-03-22 ch 10,	abusewow. i gotta say, i love the ending, even though it isn't exactly a happy one. but hey, you never do get happy endings in real life, right? it just makes your story more realistic. i would have been impossible to get a happy end anyway, since jack can't not obey what his father says, unless he runs away, or something. then, he'd have to take jill with him. if they eloped, they wouldn't have any money to live off of, and that ending would be even worse then what really happened. mostly, i love how you based your story on a nursery rhyme, i would never have thought of that. people usually base their stories on fairytales, which can get boring (unless they twist it up, like you do).
Twist Their Emotions 2008-02-17 ch 10,	abuseSo, I just randomly stumbled upon this tory and you and I think I love you. Too strong? I love twisted romance but it is hard to find well written examples. I have seen your Nutcracker story around but it seemed like a big pill to swallow, so I was unsure about reading it or not. After reading and loving this story I'm thinking I'll read your other stories and read it last. I just switched accounts because I got sick of my old one and so far I have no favorites on this one, but I'll probably add this one. As a final statement, your version of Jack and Jill is sickeningly fantastic. It's genius! When I read the chapter where the little girls were chanting it I reread it several times in. Great!
AshleyHel 2008-01-06 ch 10, anon.	abuseI think it needs to be longer, and have you ever thought it should seem like it is going to end really good, and then him slip and fall and die, and she then follows as well? Like expecting good after all the crap only to have both tumble to their death.
AndreaSaysHello 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abusei haven't started on this story yet, but it's next on my list as soon as i'm done with your cinderella story. i just wanted to comment real quick telling you how fantastic the summary is. it's wicked clever.
Jazzie Kings 2007-11-23 ch 11,	abuseI will never think of the Jack and Jill rhyme in the same way ever again. As always, this was another amazing read. Fantistic job! ^_^
Princess of Lies 2007-11-22 ch 2,	abuseOh my gawd. My name is Jill, and the Jill in your faerie tale reminds me of the way people treat me. (Not the beatings, but the townsfolk.) Just thought I'd say something. =)
JellyBeaner 2007-11-02 ch 8,	abuseWOW. I really like this story. You've taken the nursery rhyme and put a completely dark twist on it and it works. I believe thh characters are real, and although I'm extremely frusturated with the townspeople and their ignorance, I can't find a thing wrong with it! It's great! Cheers -A.
Layla-darkest night 2007-10-26 ch 10,	abuseI loved this! I'm crying right now, I'm not even kidding. I don't even know you, and I'm so proud of you. This story is incredible; it's absolutely amazing! I can't even express it in words, seriously.
La Muerte Roja 2007-09-15 ch 3, anon.	abuseO-o. Very... original. I like it. He he... JILL BEH AN EMO. ... Stares at sobbing Jill in corner Hmm. Probably shouldn't have said that. Runs off I REGRET NOTHING! La Muerte Roja
justareview 2007-08-31 ch 10,	abusewow... that was Amazing...Wow.
Francesca 2007-06-28 ch 11, anon.	abuseThis story was honestly one of the best things I've ever read. And I read a lot, sometimes more than 8 books a week, and to have been so captivated by your short story was amazing. The way you turned that simple choldhood rhyme into something so...dark and deep was amazing. I wish I had half the talent that you do. I am about to move on to read your other stories, and I'm sure that they will be just as amazingly twisted, dark, and well-written as this one.
cherry617 2007-06-10 ch 10,	abusei loved it!

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