This is masterfully written. Speaking of religion, damnation, and salvation. How do you ask for salvation when you love to do what will cause your damnation. It reminds me of Vlad the Impaler it is said that he was very relgious. Irony... Anyway this is a spectacular poem. I have added it to my favorites. kudosDumon

Hey!

VERY GOOD! *applause* Love it! About someone who cares. Thought provoking and good imagery. I like it, I love it. Keep it up!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

How beautiful

This is my favorite one yet! Keep writing!

-God loves you-

This is an amazing piece of work. You truly captured the esscece of your character. I really love this poem. Really. That's all I can think of to say. It's just amazing-the flow of the words, the emotions behind it. Keep writing. You have talent.

Wai! Poor Saiba-sama! . We loves him anyway...or perhaps because of.

Very, *very* good, Ali. Me loves it muchness.

This poem is sooo Saiba... _ He's a very interesting character! :) Tadg(aka VD)