I can hear the stars crying out that this is a really good haiku! Nice work!

I can hear them and the melody of the stars

that was really pretty too I like

magical

i love how you can capture something so amazing, in such a short clip

harder to do than longer poetry.

(the word war isnt quite as poetic, you knoww.)

Lol so simple yet brilliant :) I love its lightness well done!

This is so beautiful ... in a tiny handful of words.

*devours*

*scuttles away*

Awesome! I don't think you need any constructive criticism, so I'll just sceram out loud your work is good.

Wow. To pack so much in so little words is always amazing to me.

oh, this is so pretty! well done! elves are cool! nice poem
cya =)


-winged girl

cute.

wow.

It simple,. but descriptive! I love it! It's wonderful. :)

Keep writing.

--maybe if chance comes you could check out a few of my poems/stories.

If you'd like.

Simply beautiful. Your haikus are so striking...

Short but sweet, if I may use the clichéd phrase. ^^; Keep writing!

~*StarWolf*~

I really like this one. I can imagine them dancing around the campfire and singing to the stars...i'm sorry, i'm in a weird mood today. *Dont mind me.* Besides, i love elves too...everybody says i look like one!

I'm so jelous of good you can write!