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lael1bologna 2009-03-28 . chapter 1
I can hear the stars crying out that this is a really good haiku! Nice work!
Erlkoenigin 2008-09-04 . chapter 1
I can hear them and the melody of the stars
Morwain 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
that was really pretty too I like
Aquafied 2006-04-30 . chapter 1
magical

i love how you can capture something so amazing, in such a short clip

harder to do than longer poetry.

(the word war isnt quite as poetic, you knoww.)
elvenstorm 2003-12-11 . chapter 1
Lol so simple yet brilliant :) I love its lightness well done!
aleppine 2003-11-14 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful ... in a tiny handful of words.

*devours*

*scuttles away*
frugale 2003-11-14 . chapter 1
Awesome! I don't think you need any constructive criticism, so I'll just sceram out loud your work is good.
Eralk Fang 2003-11-09 . chapter 1
Wow. To pack so much in so little words is always amazing to me.
Emi Amara 2003-11-08 . chapter 1
oh, this is so pretty! well done! elves are cool! nice poem
cya =)


-winged girl
agny 2003-11-08 . chapter 1
cute.
Earendil=Beloved Star 2003-07-01 . chapter 1
wow.

It simple,. but descriptive! I love it! It's wonderful. :)

Keep writing.

--maybe if chance comes you could check out a few of my poems/stories.

If you'd like.
Lounalune 2003-06-25 . chapter 1
Simply beautiful. Your haikus are so striking...
StarWolf 2003-06-24 . chapter 1
Short but sweet, if I may use the clichéd phrase. ^^; Keep writing!

~*StarWolf*~
Angelfire2 2003-05-21 . chapter 1
I really like this one. I can imagine them dancing around the campfire and singing to the stars...i'm sorry, i'm in a weird mood today. *Dont mind me.* Besides, i love elves too...everybody says i look like one!
just like me 2003-05-07 . chapter 1
I'm so jelous of good you can write!
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