Hello,
Please you got to continue more. I really love the story myself. I'm so anxious to read next. What happen to the couple. The prince is very nice.

Please write more! Pretty please. I'm loving it!

Thanks a lot,
KaronePRincess

Write/upload more!

hey!

wassup?

...i like this story so far... but it appears it's been abandoned...you lied! jk

...anyways...i think you said you're leaving soon... NO!

...i looked at your art, too. it's excellent!

...um, i guess that's all. see you when you get back!

I Love it! I want more ofthis and Cyber seed! It started out like a mythological Romeo and Julliette (I can't spell). But I got s into it and when I got to the end other second chapter there wasn't a third. Please make more of "The Sword Of Cathmor". Yor promised 1 of your other reviewers. Oh well that's enough of my ranting, I really do like ur writing,
Happiness!
Andria

O, good! I like this, from the jump-into-the-action, fast movement, classical good vs. evil battle, with a nice love story woven in! All I got to say is that Eu's gonna be in just a little trouble!

Even though I've read more of the story than is available on this site...*cackles* Though I have yet to read the edited version....I felt the need to commend my "little sister" on her achievement with this story.....It's good. ....er....let me rephrase...it's very good. ^_~

*glares at others* And Kerros is MINE. *points at author* Ask her. She'll tell you....well she'd better.....;)

Peace out ^_^

YO!!!! Keep writing!! I'm anxious to find out what happen next!! I just LOVE Kerros!! He is so funny and charming! Hahaha

Well, I'll be waiting!

Yisa

AUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Geez, Cateye! Quit witht the evil cliffies! What am I saying! CLIFFIES RULE!!!!!!!

"Come in." He said"
no capital "h" or period, use a comma. You refer to the attendents as "Elf" attendents and "Elven," you need to make this uniform. Other than that, some akward wording...but a well written ch. 1. V. intriguing

Rather abrupt, I felt thrown into the story rather than pulled in. You need to work on clarity however detailed and expressive your scenery and description is. And the closing line "and thus.." is hardly a way to end a prologue that is supposed to leave you hanging, with a sense of mystery and curiosity!!

MORE KERRRIEOS! Pwease!!!!!!!!!!!YOu know i'm in love with him! Oh! Btw, the story was good too.

Oh, that was so good!!!!! Please write more!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! *begs* I'll love you forever if you finish this story!!!!! Okay...so maybe not...but still, I really want you to finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!