no, i wouldn't laugh at this. the last stanza was especially powerful, and you were very successful in conveying your plea across, this poem really evokes one's environmentalistic sentiments.

that's so SAD! I've never really thought about that before! very good

I Love it... I'm a big outdoorsy folk...!!! Thnks for reviewing some of my stuff

very nice! from what I've read from you so far, you have a way with words, and I hope you'll keep posting more of your poems or stories or anything you write! Keep up the great work!

SAVE THE TREES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAVE THEM NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And help me find my head please i can't find it anymore it's floated off and i'm so lightheaded wheeeeeeeee i can fly.
merry christmas
happy zoombong day
happy bday
happy easter
happy day
happy sleep day
happy liz is the best person that ever graced the face of the earth day.
ok i'm half-dead so i'm going to go to sleep and see if my head comes back and then maybe i'll be able to think clearly and i'll maybe make more sense.
bye bye bye bye bye bye bye
Love Always

i love that!...so true so true...but still, watch out for the monkeys and the squirell on crack!
ps-as already stated...giving moi RAVING REVIEWS will help keep you safe(er)!!!!!!!:smile:
pps-HAPPY B-DAY! cause you always say that...

Nice!!! ^_^ I liked this a lot. It was really good, everything rymned. ^_^