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| newtypeshadow 2003-05-14 ch 1,  | abusei like this poem, especially the last line, and 'behind...therein lie.' my one criticism is that the 'only a prelude' line has too many syllables, and puts a break in the poem where it otherwise flows very smoothly. oh well. you wrote this in 2001, so i don't think it much matters to you. *shrug* i *really* liked the last line. |
| Blind Fath 2002-03-09 ch 1, | abusei'm addin dis to ma fav's! amazing poem~ |
| tissue 2002-03-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. And brilliantly writen. In reality I am speechless...really this is beautiful... |