AWSOME! short and sweet XD loved it! (SPECIALLY THE BIT AT THE BEGINNING!!)
Keep it up! =P

~RL~

This was a really good story! You're right, the characters aren't developed at all, but sometimes a certain kind of story requires that. I like short romances. ;) I really like your style of writing, too! If you have time review one or two of my stories; I'd appreciate it.

this sounds great. i think so...

CARRIE..
this is my kinda story..good job!:)
ur sis