Very, very true...

Yeahhhh... I know what you're talking about! Parents are doing their best, no? So are thei kids, right? Well, I am... but nothing I do is ever good enough. That's why I've got friends... I breathe their support to keep me alive... the poem was all right but the rhyming was a little weird. It seemed a little forced, maybe you want to work on your rhyming or start writing free-verse. Whatever you cohose to do I think you can go far if you keep improving..

Wow.

wow, very good poem. I like it a lot.

scarrs, annoying little buggers...

Very Powerful, not what I expected at all.