I like how its written, I do wish you would've described how it looked more. But it was really great

Really nice poem.

You've been to Aix-en-Provence? That is one of the most beautiful places on earth, I completely agree. I like your descriptions, by just reading it I get a sence of peace and freedom...or...something... but anyways, have you visited Cassis, the fishing harbour on the Mediterranean? ...my absolute utopia. :) À dieu, fellow traveller.

-al

It put me into a craving state of nostalgia.

Don't have time to... (SOBBING) write more.

Mike, the sobbing Tea Bushman

Hey, lookie here! It has a french name! Must be good!

Actually, it was good. I liked it at least... It reminded me of when I went to France. Mind you, I only went to Paris, but I did tour all the historical sites there and stuff... and it was so amazing... makes me want to go back.

if there had been one more line in the one little rhyme sequence that had only three lines it would be a sonnet.. just tellin' ya.. haha... anywho.. I loved it... Beautiful. Well done.

*RL*

This is very pretty. You may want to use a bit more to describe the actual place...

i can almost touch the things you describem its very well written