extremly fast paced- unsure whether thats good- but i do like it!

nice.

wow what an interesting story.. uh.. i sound wierd when i say that, what i mean is that the story is really good! I love it. Please update this story. Youre on my favs list now that means that im waiting for an update!! Please? Well, when you have the time of course! ^^

WOW! Gr8 story! UPDATE!Pweety pwease?

Wow, this is really good so far! I can't wait for the next chapter- keep up the great work!-Belle

ooh good stuff, very intriguing, i really like it.. update again soon yeah? toodles!

I love this story! It's got my fav. (pirates), and a little fantasy in it. Nice touch. I like how you've worked the creatures in too. Keep up the great writing.

~**Nicole**~

GREAT STORY...i love this type of plot..but honey, u haven't updated for 3 YEARS! pls submit a message or something that tells us you are alive and what you are going to do with this awesome story...this is intriguing and i kno that you can go far with this or just pls write a conclusion or epilougue to put us to peace..PLEASE PLEASE!!thanxx

You haven't updated this in over 2 years! (and yet you're still an active member..) So, update please? I really want to see how this story unravels. I mean, why'd her mother leave? Is the blood drinker her mother?! Are all the people on the ships going to die because the monster is just going to kill them all..? So, pleaseplease update! =)
The only other thing is that Ryvara's injury seemed quite serious the moment after she got it. However, in subsequent chapters, it seems like it just disappears and she's all healthy. The rest is Great! =)

Hey! I really like your story!! Its very interesting especially chapter 7, when Ryvara finds out shes not human... PLS UPDATE!

hm.. well finn and ryvara getting together so fast was sorta... sudden. but i like the plot...

AWESOME STORY! I love it!

This is excellent. Please continue, as I'm curious as to how it will all turn out!

its really good. please update soon

*claps* from what i've read its very well done! the pirates are portrayed very well. not many people can capture them like that. u brough a lot of depth to the characters it was easy to relate. good job! i liked it a lot! ^_^