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| Scared Loveless 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI like that. So honest and creative. It accuratly describes life using supposed 'life lessons' from others. |
| Blood Sinister 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseFabtastical. Lurved it to pieces. :D |
| Lady Katreina 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseObviously you already know this poem rocks out loud. All -I- can say is thank you for it! It is freaking awesome. |
| voices untold 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abusewow... I'm lost for words. well not completely, I loved it! |
| Tabris S. Arieth 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseSeriously you're now my favorite author of poetry. This is now my new favorite poem ^ ^ |
| deletedeleteeeeee 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseSimply beautiful and very inspirational. This is one of my fav. poems around. |
| Phoebs 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's all...wow. |
| Mya von Dor 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very nicely, well done Found Poem. (Yes, this is an actual style, it's basically a bunch of stuff cut and pasted together: I did one for class with over 20 song titles) Says a lot about the neverending pull of all the different expectations people face in their lives from all different directions. All your poems are well done, really, you really know how to write/use imagery well. It's nice to see someone out here who realizes that poetry is more than just rhyming words :) |
| H. M. Banson 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abuseVery cool poem. I have to admit, when I was reading the summary, I was thinking "this is either going to be brilliant, or a piece of complete drivel." I'm pleased to report that it was the former. Again, great job with this. Always, ~Hollie Marie |
| little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuseall the meaningless ** they tell us has just been summed up in a poem that makes it meaningful...you wont be poor...Darn that cafe was lookin good too. |
| Azreal Shaw 2004-02-10 ch 1, | abuseArina showed me this, and I love it! It sounds like a evil chant, and she is often found mumbling it anymore. I have it up in my locker too |
| DIEDELETED 2004-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is on my locker, On my door at home, In many of my friends lockers, and on many of my notebooks. WE LOVE THIS POEM! |
| Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseDamn, that's just like a poem I have been thinking of writing for a long time, but yours is so much better then mine could ever be. I love the way you write. |
| Emi Amara 2003-09-18 ch 1, | abusethis is really good!! ur a good author and this poem does make sense!! ur on my favourites, (plz check out some of my poetry!) keep ritin!! cya ! =) |
| Nevermore Forevermore 2003-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cool. |