that was really pretty

m beautifulreally

it makes me wish i could go stargaze more often

(yeah. we probably should.)

oh good lord!

are you serious? amazing use of alliteration, how did you even manage to do it? And it's in the form of a haiku.

I admire your talent.

heh, you know the beauty of all things silent huh?

Oh, what a surprising allteration! Combining light with sound and silence...

I think you are my favourite Fictionpress haiku writer. No contest.
The alliteration is wonderful. I adore most of all in this the subtle overlap of two different senses - 'stars shine symphonies' - just because of the surrealness of it. I can't tell you how beautiful I thought this was. I am rarely this interested in haiku. The only thing I would change would be the title - I'd call it simply 'serenade', but that's just me.
11 out of 10.

That's really cool, I like that it's all s's, and it's really descriptive. Great job!!

wow, how pretty. I had someone explain the haiku thing to me so now i can review your poems and understand them.
I think you did very well with silent serenade,very light. I liked it very much. good luck

~Jade

Wondrous alliteration; it creates a lovely flow of words in the poem. One must love the irony in the title. ^^

That is a very lovely poem.~J

Hi! This is unique!! Well done, i especially like the alliteration, i've never seen that in a poem before! Well done
Cya =)



~ Winged Girl

ps. i have to ask what does the first part of your profile say!?

Cool. I don't like the letter s, though.

Silvery, sweet, succinct.

Awesome haiku. And even more awesome because of the alliteration. I love it. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

I love it, it's really beautiful. I like good haikus in general, but I don't write any because it's too difficult. Anyways, great job, keep it up!