Okay. Starting from the beginning, you so stole the Noodle incident innuendo from Calvin and Hobbes. Not that I mind, really, it's funny, but still... Your editing is pretty good but not perfect. You might want to just check quick on that sort of thing pre-posting. I like hearing Alan when he gets offered the 33 job. And I like having people who say darn. I like the full moon references. And the $10 bet. It's a really fun story to read, because it's so obviously something you know and care a lot about, mixed with your talent at writing people. Cheering Charms in your general direction.

Well, I think I scared you last time I attempted to propose marraige to you, so I'll just tell you I really like the way you write. I'm far less experienced with the fine world of auto racing, but you are able to make that okay, so we can still understand what's happening. I really enjoy Mr. Howe. You did well with the arguments, we are all much better off if you leave the expletives and gestures to the minds of the readers. Yay Rhe!

I love when two strong stubborn characters meet!

Nikki showed a lot of restraint, I would have gotten out of the car and strangled him until he turned as blue as his language! :) But then again, you gotta love a girl who threatens clobbering insted of sacking! :)

Leppy and Tom round out the montly crew by adding a little bit of sanity. I love it!

This must have been a blast to write, because it was really fun to read! :)

Wow!! That is all I can say! I love it! The discription of the atmosphere of the track just before the race, and the people, all fantastic!

I love Alen's character, single minded and hot-tempered, and he makes no apologies for it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Young lady you have a future in writing. Take it from someone who is finally being paid to write :)

Always write about what you know and love. It shows here!