Ah! you have to put up the next chapter!

Awesome story wish it was finished!

I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!! (One thing...right at the end, when Sasa tells Kaori to pack, you called her Sana twice :)

this is interesting ^^

when r your characters gonna stop by boston??? um...just to let you know my ending was a joke.

haha? still mad? i really hope not cuz i miss your cussing.

eeeee!! twins!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!!
::bouncy-bounce::

Randy: i don't get it...
Adrian: ::sigh:: read it again.
Randy: i'm still confused! Addy! explain the story to meeeeeeee.....::bounces impatiently::
Adrian: ::pulls on Randy's horns:: 'ey, this is kinda fun...

eee...wingly-boy got hit with a stapler...yay?!

::growls:: wanna see sketchies.
::beams:: i just wanted to say, i like the simplicity of this story...i prefer this kind of style as opposed to heavy, dense reading...::is lazy::
everything is still kinda mysterious, too...

the winged boy is the good guy? (he seems to think so) hrmm.....
ah! well, he seems interesting so far, wanna know more about his character, yesh...

eee...dunno who to root for, Sasa or winged boy...hrmm...i think wingly-boy wins, because i like wings^_^;;;

'ello!
this seems very suspenseful so far...i just read the first chapter (i've finally got time to read other people's stuff for once) and i enjoyed it...keep writing future chapters so that I don't have to be in suspense when i go on reading this...the writing is good, and it'll get even better the more you write. hope the writer's block clears off, though. ::hates that::
okie, better keep reading, then...

-the infamous l-chan-

This fic is soooo ggoooood!!! By the way, I know what you're talking about... that elevator go down the hole thing... @_@ Okay, lady!! LOL!!!

ummm,, what happened??

I love it so far. My favorite colors are red and black(that has no relevence besides that he has red eyes -.-; ) Any ways it is really good Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*GLARE* I THOUGHT you SAID you would be UPDATING SOMETIME b/c you were in the middle of typing another chapter!!!!!!!!!!! c'mon!! *whines* i'm bbbbbooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeedddddd and i really wanna see what happens in this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update! update! update! update!update! update! update! update!update! update! update! update! *chant fades away...*

~aznchick~

what's in the bushes?!!!?!?! update soon! are they ever gonna go to Wonderland then???