Nice. Straight-forward, bashing, with a touch of hope for all those frustrated guys.
I like it. (You're very good at finding rhymes by the way. I almost envy you... except then... I wouldn't be me...) I like it anyways.

As a hint, I would include something about the girls who no one ever notices (me). The quiet nice ones who won't screw a guy into the ground every chance she gets, and use him for his money. But that's really good anyway!

HAHAHA! I need to show this to Jesse to show him we're not worth banging his head on a wall for!heheheh.

I love the style that you wrote this one in. Great work!

i liked this poem alot! It's so true too! ^-^ nicely written! good job!

Well said. I wish that guys these days would realize that.


~Ninth Lady~ "The Messiah of Silence"

Brilliant!

Even though I'm not of the male population, I have to say that this was still a very inspiring poem...(just plug in all the 'girl's with 'guy's, etc...) You've gotten the message across beautifully, and I should really get some of my guy friens to read this.

~EG

Awesome!

THAT WUZ REELY GOOD I LIKED IT KEEP 'EM ** 2 ME

do you know what my BUNS look like

LOL That's great *smiles* When you put it like that it all seems so simple. I've never really been attracted to the girls who have a reputation for being good looking anyway. The girls I think are pretty are the ones who are pretty inside. The outside is a bonus. Anyhow fanks, it (you!) made me smile :)