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| mai 2002-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abusehere is another review for you! ^-^ i really like this poem... very touching and sad... i usually don't like sad poems but this one is really good. i hope that you write more poems in the future! ^-^ |
| Kawarinaku Kinsei 2002-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWell, at least I got more than one review for this ^^ I've uploaded 23 things on here so far but I lamst never get reviews -.-' Arigatou! *Bows* ~ * ~ K I N S E I ~ * ~ |
| Surtout Seul 2002-03-21 ch 1, | abuse;_; I like this poem! it is very good ... and it definetly hits close to home for me ... >.> but anyways I like it a lot... I love rhyming poetry and find myself rhyming at the most in appropriate times ... it's funny well anyways I'll shut up now! |
| Emmalee 2002-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty. It sounded like lyrics to a song or something, you should try to put a melody to it. All your ryhmes and rythms work. Very nice. Keep writing. :-D |