beautiful

And you've done it, once again! Leaving me with no words!

-Tigra- .

Hey ooman! Got round to it finally! Seriously, you know i love your poems, you are brilliant at it, and one day you'll make your fortune from in and then you'll be forced to buy the 1st round at Gate 28 forever! Mwahahaha! Anyway... this is my favourite, i like the rhyme, the emotions of it everything. You officially rock.

good job with your rhyming there. imagery is also clear and well-described, and beautiful metaphors. gives an old-fashioned, romantic feel. my only gripe is that it is a little cliche. you have talent.

If you think any of my poetry is genius, you ought to just look at some of your own stuff! This is truly amazing...I am a big fan of rhymes, and that was excellent! The fact that it had to rhyme all the way through didn't hinder your expression at all-in fact, it made it that much more meaningful! Okay, I'm in awe. *_* lol you SHOULD be proud of this one! MJ

Absolutely beautiful imagery. The rhyming to couple with it is also well done. The feeling of a lovely fantasy comes through very strongly, and I commend you for it.