   janine1 2002-04-04 . chapter 8this was a great chapter, verry exciting, i hope ther is more action like this in the future... keep goin jess! this was really good! |
| janine1 2002-04-04 . chapter 7 the last part of this was soo sweet, it almost made me cry... it was just so sweet, hel is warming up to mina and everything, im gonna go cry now, keep up the good work! |
| janine1 2002-04-04 . chapter 6 this is a really sad chapter, u keep amazing me with ur tallent... keep goin jess!!!! |
| janine1 2002-04-04 . chapter 5 wow i hope hel is gonna be okay, i love this story jess, i just couldnt stop reading it! KEEP GOING!!!! |
| janine1 2002-04-04 . chapter 4 i loved this chapter, and im sorry i didnt leave a review for the last chapter, for some reason my computer wouldnt let me... any ways keep up the good work! |
| janine1 2002-04-04 . chapter 2 i like this... just pulls you in and makes u read more.. keep goin! |
 Metropolis Dream 2002-03-23 . chapter 9WOW... Eve, eh? I like her... Hel's my favorite tops though... *squeezes Hel in a tight hug* MY FRIEND! Erm... *notices her bite* Ooooook... Heh. That was a good chapter.
I liked the fact that the town was so empty and thoughs who DID live there were the undead. Very nice. Reminds me of EverQuest :-)
Eve sounds like a badass chick man... wouldn't like to ** her off *_* .......
Erm... LOL I love this, Jess... you should continue. VERY interesting. |
 ChibiYuffie 2002-03-18 . chapter 8lol u got luans part right at the botton...sexy man...hehe its very good how she isnt as soft as she use to be..i likeher nice and rough..hehe shes on of the best charaters ive seen |
 Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 8 The idea was creative.
I awaite for more...
/grin |
| Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 7 Very good, as always. |
| Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 6 Hel didn't sound so thrilled about this "disease"...
/smile |
| Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 6 Hel didn't sound so thrilled about this "disease"...
/smile |
| Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 5 This infection seems deadly.
A vampiric poison? Very good.
I'm waiting with anticipation to read more... |
| Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 4 Reading over your reviews, Silvara of the Elven Council has spunk for this story, nah? Along with many other readers. Very good... you have a mysterious potential I'm beginning to lean on.
The small battle between the vampire and Hel was quite interesting. Although, if Hel were as dangerous as said she was, I think should would have been more aggressive.
Your story, your ideas. I believe Silvara said that once? Good saying... makes sense. Now, if only people would remember that from time to time while reading other peoples work... |
| Sweet n' Sour 2002-03-18 . chapter 3 Hel, hm? She sounds like an interesting character. I would love to see pictures of this Hel woman. Mina is probably my favorite so far. |
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