This wasn't bad actually. ^-^ I rather enjoyed it, though the format did hurt my eyes.

!~* Noelle *~!

It seems alienated and cold. I like it, though.

This sounds like the kind of self indulgent rant typical of seriel killers. Whining about this and that and about the love they never recieved as children...which they didn't even deserve because they were psychos even then...

But nevertheless, it was rather well written. The things you had to say were...true.

i like that alot...it's got that certain jene se qua (i'm sorry if i spelled that wrong. spanish is my area not french, or not yet anyway)but anyway very good poem kudos!

i hate reviews ,but can you tell me where ,can i find something else,written by your majesty?

Your poem is dark and depressing. Which automatically makes it cool :) and I espacially like the last line. It dosn't seem like it should be there but strangely enough, it's fitting.