I love this poem. It's elegant and so easy to read, it just flows so nicely. I could think of a whole bunch of extravagant words to praise this, but I think the simplest is good job.

- Meadow

This is ALOT like shel silverstine (he's one of my favorite poets to) are there any real words that rhyme with monkey? if you can think of a (real) word that rhyms with brocolli I'll be supprised.

Well, the first word that comes to mind when I read this is 'uhhhhhhhhhhhh...' No really! That's the word I think of! _ Anyway, I thought it was intrestin... A good idea, although I would've done something different with it if it was mine. -haley

lol omg this is soooooo funny- this could totally pass as a Shel Silvertein poem- he is the most awesome poet! this is really really good!

Love Always