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| dernhelm de la marca 2008-02-07 ch 5,  | abuseHey! i was looking for a good story to read and i found yours, but then i noticed that its unfinished... i would really love to keep reading it. yo should finish it! hope to hear about you soon! |
| xDustxBunnyx 2007-12-16 ch 5, | abusePlease? Could you please update? For me? No? ^_^;; Its been what, five years? No update. What a shame. What a ** shame. Really, though, maybe you could just write one chapter that could answer all of our questions and finally get Angel and Lori together. Just something to make your readers happy. I think I speak for all of us when I say that this is a wonderful fic and it deserves an end, no? Very well then, I'll put this on my alerts anyway just in case you decide to update and make me happy. With doom, DB *if you even use this email anymore* |
| SesshoumaruTakahashi 2007-12-01 ch 5, | abuseoh! More more! Pleease? You are a fantastic writer.. I envy you. |
| Twinkling Moon 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseThis is a really unique story, and it's well written. Though in the first few chapters it seemed as if some workd has been left out of the sentence. Angel is so sweet, I just love him to bits. |
| GothBooks17 2007-05-26 ch 5, | abuseLove ,Love this story. One day I hope you will contuine. |
| biscuit92 2007-01-05 ch 5, | abuse(oh... another story with ang angel with it! seriuosly, i never get tired of it) in short... i like it! update! i want to learn what's next! (please...?) |
| Midori 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's an amazing idea. The description of Lori and the battle scene are the best. I think you could go more into depth when Lori finds the angel. It seems off somehow, like Lori isn't surprised enough...ior human enough. Would he immediately help the angel? Personally, I would freak out first, pacing and circles and talking outloud, before finally coming to the decision. But otherwise, very nicely written. |
| Instant-Soup 2006-12-13 ch 5, | abusecute! -squeaks- yay! x |
| beloved18 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuse! |
| Shadesome 2006-11-19 ch 5, | abuseLuff this! |
| Georgie 2006-09-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseHi, i forgot to sign in before reviewing... anyways. usually i don't read Stories that are fantasy like this. but since the plot didnt seem too odd i took a try and what do you know.. i loved it. it's a very good story so far. i just hope you continue with it. some stories dont hold my interest but this did so get on writing already. lol. well anyways... my id on here is Georgie12345678... just thought i'd say that before i finish this. your characters are nice. and i like that the Angel cant speak... makes it a little more like its not total fantasy. well i have more to say but im known to leave very long reviews so ill stop now. bye |
| chrnoskitty 2006-08-13 ch 5, | abuseI love this story... Really cute. Is it over, or are you going to continue? Eh, anyways, keep up the great work! |
| whyme300 2006-07-03 ch 5, | abuseRAWR! Why havn't you updated this story?! I hate how everyone on Fictionpress doesn't update good stories! I like this story so much!! I almost cried when it ended on the 5th chapter!! v_v *sigh* |
| Alicia 2006-01-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseIt's so cute and amazing and good and... poor Lori! T_T I really hope you continue this... |
| m 2005-12-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhats gonna happen next? Are you going to update? Oh you gotta that was getting real good and yeah so great writing and stuff!! |