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Guardrail 2006-11-03 . chapter 8
Beautiful imagry, I love the picture you've made here.
Guardrail 2006-11-03 . chapter 5
I really like this, especially how the first and last lines are only one word. Well done.
Ygg 2005-08-03 . chapter 10
Wow the imagery is just stunning! Extraordinary haiku!
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 10
Unique imagery and strong portrayal of emotions.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 9
I like the chilling theme in these and the stillness that comes with the cold.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 8
A reverence towards animals and their strength.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 7
The last line was humorous and matter-of-fact - nature is wondrous.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 6
I love that image of "fiery leaves" Very fierce and passionate.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 5
I feel the wind in my face in this one.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 4
Quite nice. I like the symbolism.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 3
Yes, indeed.
Summer Walters 2005-02-03 . chapter 8
This one not so much creates a visual image but an abstract idea, struggle. Very nice.
Summer Walters 2005-02-03 . chapter 7
I really like the word choices (e.g. sun glints, sharp fangs, ice beast) and how they complement each other. The whole haiku just just sounds really nice.
Ellerfru 2002-05-19 . chapter 4
Really good... I love how the first and last line only consist of one word.
Ellerfru 2002-05-19 . chapter 3
Beautiful... You're a really good haiku writer. You know, haiku is my favorite genre. Please write more!
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