 Guardrail 2006-11-03 . chapter 8Beautiful imagry, I love the picture you've made here. |
 Guardrail 2006-11-03 . chapter 5I really like this, especially how the first and last lines are only one word. Well done. |
 Ygg 2005-08-03 . chapter 10Wow the imagery is just stunning! Extraordinary haiku! |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 10Unique imagery and strong portrayal of emotions. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 9I like the chilling theme in these and the stillness that comes with the cold. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 8A reverence towards animals and their strength. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 7The last line was humorous and matter-of-fact - nature is wondrous. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 6I love that image of "fiery leaves" Very fierce and passionate. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 5I feel the wind in my face in this one. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 4Quite nice. I like the symbolism. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-02 . chapter 3Yes, indeed. |
 Summer Walters 2005-02-03 . chapter 8This one not so much creates a visual image but an abstract idea, struggle. Very nice. |
 Summer Walters 2005-02-03 . chapter 7I really like the word choices (e.g. sun glints, sharp fangs, ice beast) and how they complement each other. The whole haiku just just sounds really nice. |
 Ellerfru 2002-05-19 . chapter 4Really good... I love how the first and last line only consist of one word. |
 Ellerfru 2002-05-19 . chapter 3Beautiful... You're a really good haiku writer. You know, haiku is my favorite genre. Please write more! |