B!tchin ending ;] I loved this story. I don't even think I've read the children's version but in this one Hansel was hot, lol.

Awesome story. I'm a little disappointed with the ending though. After everything the step mother put them through I was hoping for a more creative demise.

This was awesome! I love the twist with Hansel and Gretel not being related - makes the ending so much better knowing they'll be together - and that Fiona will be dead. I hated her. Same with the witch. Great story, I'll def. take the time to read your other stories ;)

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This was good and entertaining to read, but it is definitely lacking compared to your other stories. There were a few grammatical errors, and it lacked a lot of the complexity your other stories have. However, this may just be due to the fact that it was written earlier.

I enjoyed reading it anyway. :)

stupid Fiona.

If you reread this story, I have a little constructive advice: Maybe oyu should rethink some moments where you mix in (what I think is) more modern language.

From the beginning of the story, I thought it was set in an older time period, with language like "cannot" and "must" and "go into town". That worked for me, definitely.
A couple of things in the first chapter were my indications that would continue to be a little mixed with things like "...pretty much forced..." from the step-mother, and in the mother's note, it says "...I didn't know until after" (this one didn't use proper grammar, to be honest)
These are small things, obviously, but just in case you wanted to be on top of every last detail of the story, there you go. I hope that only serves as helpful.

I really enjoyed your retelling of Hansel and Gretel.
Very interesting and compelling, a very good read

I liked this. It was a rerally creepy outlook on Hansel and Gretel. I really liked the ending. That mean old mom got what she deserved!

Dude, err, or should I say dudette? Anyway, this whole story is so dark and twisted, I loved it. I haven't been able to find any really good stories as of late, so I was extremely happy with this story, please continue on and never stop writing!

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I'm out bitch ha, jk

For real tho, nice work and see ya hun!

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Cat

oh wow. yet another fucked up fairy tale. bravo!!

O.O Wow. This kicks the crap outta my Hansel and Gretel story on fanfiction. I absolutely love your twisted fairy tales.

Hm... Interesting developement...

Despite the fact that divorce wasn't done in the early 14th century, or really until the 16th or so, it is a very good beginning. Although it does pose the question whether or not Hansel is truly related to Gretel...

ok just for u to know im interested in your writting because i heard that it was good. i may not review often but thats cuz im a slow reader hehe. ok anyway i know its soon for marketing ploys, but please read some of my stuff, it is also gory. yay! oh and im a lot like you...but u and i r unique so not quite...ok im weird so im shutting up now before you hate me...

I never would have thought you could turn Hansel and Gretel into something like this. I like it so much better than the actual story. I liked how everything came into play and the way things worked out in the end. But, boy, could I go for some sugar right now...