Reviews for Window Panes of Sugar

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Jayjack 2008-07-22 ch 12,	abusestupid Fiona.
Incurable Adoration 2008-03-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseIf you reread this story, I have a little constructive advice: Maybe oyu should rethink some moments where you mix in (what I think is) more modern language. From the beginning of the story, I thought it was set in an older time period, with language like "cannot" and "must" and "go into town". That worked for me, definitely. A couple of things in the first chapter were my indications that would continue to be a little mixed with things like "...pretty much forced..." from the step-mother, and in the mother's note, it says "...I didn't know until after" (this one didn't use proper grammar, to be honest) These are small things, obviously, but just in case you wanted to be on top of every last detail of the story, there you go. I hope that only serves as helpful.
TheNowandFutureQueen 2008-02-27 ch 13,	abuseI really enjoyed your retelling of Hansel and Gretel. Very interesting and compelling, a very good read
Ravensbleeding 2007-12-08 ch 12,	abuseI liked this. It was a rerally creepy outlook on Hansel and Gretel. I really liked the ending. That mean old mom got what she deserved!
Alisha 2007-06-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseDude, err, or should I say dudette? Anyway, this whole story is so dark and twisted, I loved it. I haven't been able to find any really good stories as of late, so I was extremely happy with this story, please continue on and never stop writing! - I'm out ** ha, jk For real tho, nice work and see ya hun! - Cat
toxic-noodle725 2007-02-18 ch 13,	abuseoh wow. yet another ** up fairy tale. bravo!!
Strange Fuzz 2007-01-31 ch 13,	abuseO.O Wow. This kicks the crap outta my Hansel and Gretel story on fanfiction. I absolutely love your twisted fairy tales.
Shadow Gryphon 2006-05-06 ch 3,	abuseHm... Interesting developement...
Shadow Gryphon 2006-05-06 ch 2,	abuseDespite the fact that divorce wasn't done in the early 14th century, or really until the 16th or so, it is a very good beginning. Although it does pose the question whether or not Hansel is truly related to Gretel...
Antique Murder 2005-03-14 ch 1,	abuseok just for u to know im interested in your writting because i heard that it was good. i may not review often but thats cuz im a slow reader hehe. ok anyway i know its soon for marketing ploys, but please read some of my stuff, it is also gory. yay! oh and im a lot like you...but u and i r unique so not quite...ok im weird so im shutting up now before you hate me...
Bal8rokstar 2004-12-06 ch 1,	abuseI never would have thought you could turn Hansel and Gretel into something like this. I like it so much better than the actual story. I liked how everything came into play and the way things worked out in the end. But, boy, could I go for some sugar right now...
Magenta Luna 2004-10-29 ch 13,	abusewow, cant seem to get enough of your twisted fairy tales. so wickedly fine. hope to see more, and could you also add me to your mailing list.i want to be notified when you update.
Fiyero Oberon 2004-02-13 ch 12,	abuseThis was great! I don't think the rating was neccessary... I think PG-13 would do it. This was very good, it's sad that Simon had to die though. It's not sad, however, the Fiona had to die. Hehehe, good job!
cope 2003-06-17 ch 13,	abusei've read all of your twisted tales and i have to say that i love them so much! i would also really like to know where i could find some of the other twisted tales that you mentioned. i really hope that you write some more really soon and post them here.
MiniMichelle2 2003-06-14 ch 12,	abuseI love it!! The ending is deliciously evil hehehhe keep it up!!

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