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| AethraZip 2004-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseAhh, I thought this sounded rather Divinitas-esque. Chapter 50-something in particular. 52? 53? I dunno. Anyway.. the poem's great. I'm not much of a poetry critic, so I pretty much have to go with "I like it and stuff." |
| HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect 2004-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It ends too soon, or not properly, in my opinion, like, it feels incomplete. other than that, its great ^_^ |
| banalheart 2002-04-22 ch 1, | abusea poem evokes memories, it personofies the human ideal or conveys meaning in words. It is a sacred thing that few of us can attempt to master. this peice shows the duality of love/hate, a common emotion umong man-unkind. Though you could be a little more detailed with your wording ( most people are tactile creatures ) you've done really really well.i enjoyed it, which is the ultimate point of a poem. |