Ahh, I thought this sounded rather Divinitas-esque. Chapter 50-something in particular. 52? 53? I dunno.
Anyway.. the poem's great. I'm not much of a poetry critic, so I pretty much have to go with "I like it and stuff."

I love it. It ends too soon, or not properly, in my opinion, like, it feels incomplete. other than that, its great ^_^

a poem evokes memories, it personofies the human ideal or conveys meaning in words. It is a sacred thing that few of us can attempt to master. this peice shows the duality of love/hate, a common emotion umong man-unkind. Though you could be a little more detailed with your wording ( most people are tactile creatures ) you've done really really well.i enjoyed it, which is the ultimate point of a poem.