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| Alfsigesey 2002-12-22 ch 1,  | abusethat sounded quite cool, *sigh* I love gore... ANYWHO! Thanks for reviewing my story, and having all the stores be closed on sunday has never been a problem for me, ironically, until today. I have some friends coming down tonight, and we agreed to exchange presents. But I was stupid and forgot to buy them something, so now I have to run to whatever store is open and grab something for them! I don't mind though... Most of the stuff around where I live is still open. Keep writting! You've got talent, dispite the tendancy to make the point become lost in phrasing. Most people do that. Several of my friends have a real problem with it. ~Miss Understood the evil daughter of Tessorciodellammamma and insane ruler of the chess army known as 'Molto Bella' by her people on the planet somethingor other who when she is not being chased by Teletubbies enjoys playing in traffic |
| Kekadu the Goddess of Chaos 2002-03-11 ch 1, | abusehmmm... lovely. what did your teacher think of it? Very descriptive. |