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| Silver Shadow 2002-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! that was so cool. It reminds me of a couple kids i know. It gives out a great message! |
| gone13213 2002-04-28 ch 1,  | abusei don't usually post reviews (because i'm too lazy) but this one really blew me away. it's amazing how much talent you must have to be able to put such an awsoe story into rhyme and verse. brilliant. |
| SweetGrape 2002-04-10 ch 1, | abusethat last stanza is a heartstopper |
| empty account 2002-03-28 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great poem, wonderful message, makes me think. |
| Desere 2002-03-24 ch 1, | abuseVery strong, though I found the style changed.. you went from every other line to every line to rhyme(can't spell right now tired). Not sure if it was done intentionally or not, just thought I'd point it out. |
| Suzanne Star 2002-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. Thats really deep. I like it a lot. Makes you think of all the kids out there that have family problems, and have been trained to hide it all. I know those problems all too well. Nice work, and thanks for reviewing my poem! |
| hudsiyfiusnfsudi 2002-03-15 ch 1, | abusesounds like one of my friendships. It died over two years. i like this poem, it has a lot of meaning. thanks for writting it. |
| grey spirit 2002-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThe last stanza is mind-boggling. An absolute gem that ties the poem together wonderfully. Keep writing. |