Hummm, I thought I reviewed this one already, guess not. anyway, I really like it. It reminds me of something . . .something good ... but I can't remeber. Oh well, I think of it just at the worst time most likly, like right when I'm about to fall a asleep. Anyway, I really lik it, and yes, the trip to NY is a pain in the *** :) Well, very nicely done.

I like it. 800 miles... interesting... feel like a **, eh? Curious... *nods* curious indeed...

hand be the BECKtionary, psh... the rhyming BECKtionary. Did you ever see that episode? Yeah, that was my comment on your abililty to use rhymes that odn't sounded forced. (it's good)

i know what you mean about long trips being a great time to reflect. i drove to las vegas, and it took 6 hours. i got alot of good poems from the trip. this is really good. it's sort of...mm...melancholy. yeah lol. maybe if ya get a chance, could you check out some of my stuff? thx bye!

-Rachelle

Beautiful poem. It flows great too ^^ I should try to rhyme my poems some time.

wow, i liked that. the kind of thing you can read over and over and not get tierd of, in fact ... i'll go do that now. good work.