Wow, this is cool. But you're right, it does sound a bit like Dr. Seuss on depressents. I mean no offence by this. Au contraire mon amie, I really like this poem. You always do such a good job. Anyway, keep up the good work, or not, whatever pleases you. But I think you soundn't ever stop, you're too good. O.k. Im going to stop now before i star rambling. Oh that's already happened. Well, good job. :)

normality is overrated anyway

I like it!!! good job!!

ah ha! I knew it!
complicated poem, i like the structure, and of course it's amazing... since it's you. :)

wow! i really like this poem! i'd like to read more!