   pockets are my friends 2006-07-03 . chapter 1My friend recommended your story to me, but I don't know what's wrong with my computer but it won't let me see you're full chapters on fiction press. It's so annoying cause I only got to read the first chapter and I'm already hooked. Is there another website this might be on? Please get back to me when you can. |
 Riku E. Fallon 2005-05-12 . chapter 1I like! I gotta go to clas now, I'll read more later, I can't wait! ^_^ |
 Timid 2004-05-03 . chapter 24 This looked pretty good... and I REALLY wanted to read it. However the formatting is so ** up I can't read it. Funny symbols everywhere. |
 FireBringer 2004-02-19 . chapter 1Cool |
 the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 24wow. it's like a repeating thingy. . . they all do over. . . or not. . . haha. . . thanks for this fantastic story! i really enjoyed it! |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 23 . . .im sad. . . W A A A A A A A A A A A! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! but that was sucha good story. seriously. it was awesome!! |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 22 poor kimi... |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 21 Oh No! |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 20 i feel really sorry for both of them now...*gets all emotional again* |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 19 *is so hooked* |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 18 I love cliffies!!..as long as the next one is out! |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 17 ^_^ *is feeling all weird...* what is going to happen to Dayneth? wah! i miss him!! |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 16 aw...how sad... |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 15 sigh... is this awesome story coming to an end... no... |
| the red krayon 2003-10-23 . chapter 14 i just noticed that there are a lot of flashbacks... this is getting very god... |
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