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| I Adore Linear Regression 2007-07-30 ch 6,  | abuseI'd say that this chapter is a little random compared to the others. But I'm looking forward to an update. |
| Morbid 2007-04-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseRun where? Are you going to continue? This is good stuff d00d. |
| Morbid 2007-04-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseNow this is interesting. |
| Morbid 2007-04-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseHm. |
| Morbid 2007-04-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis has no action. But still a fair enough bridge. |
| Morbid 2007-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abused00d I like that. Its good. Very good. |
| pneumothorax 2004-12-29 ch 5, | abuseI liked this one the most. The part about not knowing whether to feel angry or sad because you feel sad too - I liked that line. Really affecting. Could be applied to lots of situations I guess. It'd be interesting to know whihc one you wrote it for? |
| pneumothorax 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abusesimple little review from me. weird but good. seemed a little simple. i'll read the rest later if i remember. |
| cOOkiMoNsteR626 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abusewow, this was very deep! i likes it! |
| pneumothorax 2003-07-24 ch 2, | abusehi, reading another of your fics and just wanted to say that I really loved this one. It'd be great to see what happens next because it's a brilliant start. [yes, all ym reviews sound kinda the same], but now that she realises that she's got the power to change it I'd be good to see what she'll do. The only thing I'd say is that to me I can't really imagine doign anythign I wanted because I wouldn't have the guts to actually kill myself. but for her I can understand how suddenly she must have more freedom. Very well written and beautifully told. Cali. |
| Asheratah 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely and touching, and ever so slightly shivery. I like it :-) Although she does change her mind a little too suddenly, but what harm, sometimes its like that. :) |
| DestructionMage 2003-07-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! Keep up the good work and yes, there is a story line to my story. ;) I hope you would take a peek at my newest story - Tears Of The Swallow... perhaps you can help me reedit it? PS : do you know how I can get words to stay italized when I put it out for people to read? -DestructionMage |
| Lynn Wilson 2003-07-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very uplifting story. Which hopefully was the point? The only criticism I might have, is that is much harder than this story depicts to change your mind about life that drastically. Of course, there was some sort of mystical intervention, so I could buy it. This jumbled review says basically that I liked your story. |