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| Phoebs 2004-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseYou are great at rhyming...unbelievable! It's amazing the way you string the words, making everything flow so easily and nicely together. Nice one. |
| little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuseI love that state of awake/asleep you captured it well.Wonderful,exellent all that crap.Keep writing it keeps us sane. |
| Scarlet Starfire 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI love it and I know what you mean. I love the time before you fully wake and hate it when I finally wake up. I wish I could just stay there forever. Half the time I want to start throwing things around my room and destroy things because I don't see the point of everyday life. I love your poetry, you should teach me, lol, j/k |
| scarred 2002-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWOW! That is so creepy... I know just what you mean about the whole in between sleep and awake. A couple of monthes ago when I was really confused and messed up (not saying that u r messed up at all!!!) I used to wait all day to be able to go to sleep again because those few precious minutes before sleep were perfect. And when I would wake up fully I would be so mad! I would just want to throw and destroy everything in my room becuase I didn't want to go back to the reality of my life. I just wanted to be in my own perfect world for ever. Now I still love that inbetween time, but I don't need it as much as I used to. |
| Westie Down Under 2002-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWOW |
| Ragdoll 2002-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It's so deep and really does conjure up the type of feeling you get in a semi-conscious state. You know how I like to shape reality ;) "In between unconscious thinking, Beauty courts Insanity, The winds sing sonnets to the trees, And laugh upon Humanity" Beautiful as always =) You're special, never forget it. |
| gasoline rainbows 2002-03-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, wonderful. Quite beautiful. I'll recommend this to Jenette, she knows more about the between than I do. Your metaphors are, as always, astoundingly wonderful and delicately written with a force of power behind them. Your incorporation of your Dragon works well in this as well. ~Scarlet |
| vers le sud 2002-03-17 ch 1, | abuseSimply amazing! I'm sure you've been told before that you have extraordinary talent. I love your rhyming, and the magnificent way you portray the world of dreams. Just one stanza from this piece could make anyone jealous. Keep writing! ~Karasu |
| Werecat99 2002-03-16 ch 1, | abuseOriginal and thought provoking. I loved the way you fit the Dragon in. Good work. |